Monday 29 May 2017

Will's Power Writing

LOCKED

My name is... Dotty! (That's my name). I'm locked in the pound! You nay ask how I got here. It was a dark, gloomy night cars were quiet but in the presence became the DOG PATROL. Were you may not know, they catch Dogs just like me! Then they shove you in a cage, give you not even a bowl full of food and what is a puddle of dirty water, Seriously! I miss home quite a bit, I've got NO friends until...

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1 comment:

  1. You can just imagine that can't you? It would be very sad to be in the pound, for a dog! Who wrote the book? What rating do you give the book? Who or what age would this book be best suited too?

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