Tuesday 17 September 2019

Smoothie instructions

This week we have been writing instructions for our favourite smoothie. My favourite is a mixed berry smoothie. These are my instructions.

4 comments:

  1. Yummm...I look forward to you making me one 😅

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  2. WOAH
    COOOOOL
    I like it, Ok let me introduce myself
    I'm Kade a year 6 from Rimu class.
    I might use this sometime.
    Is they any other smoothie recipe ideas?
    Maybe next time you could make the recipe more EXCITING!
    Other than that, great job
    Kind regards
    Kade

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  3. Kia Ora!
    My name is Maddison I am a year 7 student at Yaldhurst Model School.

    AWSOME!
    I really enjoyed this I think that this is a super cool way to share this. I think that t is an awesome blog post that is extremely eye catching and I loved reading it.

    I think that to improve you could add in a screacastifu of you creating this I think that you could also add in your own picture of the smoothie.

    Thank you so much!
    Have you tried it?
    -Maddie

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  4. Kia Ora,
    I'm Grace from Yaldhurst Model school.
    I enjoyed this a lot because its nice how you shared it and added some colour on the background.

    This reminded me when I went to technology and we made something similar like mango and berries.
    We made it dairy free,

    Maybe next time you add more colour or maybe put into something else maybe a biteable.
    But apart from that its good
    - Grace

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Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.