At the moment we are reading "The Mines Afire". We had to write a diary entry about the events at The Brunner Mine on the 26 March 1896. We had to put it into our perspective. It was really interesting. This is mine so far.
I enjoyed reading your diary entry, you have used a variety of punctuation and added in some descriptive language. I particularly enjoyed your last paragraph as it really created an image in my mind and made me feel sorry for your character having to move away from his mum. Could you please add your diary entry to a google slide, then embed the slide onto your blog.
Hi Will
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading your diary entry, you have used a variety of punctuation and added in some descriptive language. I particularly enjoyed your last paragraph as it really created an image in my mind and made me feel sorry for your character having to move away from his mum. Could you please add your diary entry to a google slide, then embed the slide onto your blog.
Thanks
Miss Power