Friday, 14 June 2019

Brochure

In class this week we have been thinking about what Greymouth needs to attract tourists. I thought about a bike park. There could be easy tracks for beginners and hard tracks for experts. I would happily be part of the building as I have made my own bike tracks a home. This is my slide

2 comments:

  1. Hi there Will, my name is Abby and I am a year 7 student at Yaldhurst Model School, YMS for short.

    I like the way you explained what you were doing and made your blog post eye catching.

    This reminds me of Cycle safety where some people were REALLY good at biking and the rest of us were good but not amazing.

    Next time you could explain more clearly in the slide about the area. It looks like it already exists.

    Is this about your plans to make a bike park?
    Or does it already exist?

    Kind Regards,
    Abby.

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  2. I like the way you stated what you want to do, Will, and the way you offered your time to help.
    You could add why you thi6ghis would be good for tourists (or would it be even better for locals?)

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Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.